Kommunity Story (rp)

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Comment by Clem (Racoowolf) on April 27, 2013 at 12:05pm

Then she ate a whopper at BK

Comment by Rachel (The Gallifreyan) on April 27, 2013 at 12:04pm

From a dark shadow in the street a girl whom looked around 16 appeared. "I guess the world is changing" she whispered. "Perfect oppurtunity to get known."

Comment by Rylee(Doppelganger OF DOOM [BC]) on April 27, 2013 at 12:04pm

Then Clover bought a catcow and made it her pet, then slayed a Jabberwocky with the vorpal sword used by Alice.

Comment by Ken H (Taco Griffin) on April 26, 2013 at 1:47pm

And then from the outer reaches of the galaxies came a bright light the closer it got to the earth the brighter it got.. then it broke through the atmosphere and landed in LA.... 

Comment by scylla(naughtyvampire steampunk) on April 26, 2013 at 1:46pm

I dont have a idea

Comment by Vincent Prendick (Shadow Eater) on April 22, 2013 at 9:26am

After that is done, we can have them be collected by our fourth, a man with the same history as them. His name will need to be decided upon, and it can even be an alias, or fake name, to enhance his mysteriousness.

Even steps out into the hospital hallway but runs into a man in a dark coat.

Even: I'm sorry, sir, excuse me.

Even attempts to move away, but something has him by the shoulder. Even turns and sees that the man in the coat is holding him back.Even: Let go of me! You're one of them aren't you?

The man shakes his head and holds a finger up to his lips: No, but you must follow me... if you want to know the truth about yourself.

Even: About myself?

The man turns away and runs with his coat flowing behind him. As Even decided, two men in white coats hollered after him. And before he knew it, Even was running after the man in the dark coat. The man led him out of the hospital across the street into a parked, black car. Even jumped in the front seat and they sped off just as the two white coats came barging out.
Even: Who are they?

The man shifted gears: They have no name, but they are always dressed the same. They are the White Coats. Extremists that believe that our kind shouldn't exist.

Even: Our kind?The man nodded:Yes. We are a race of humans that do not awaken until later in childhood. Like you, I had the same awakening.

Even: The Earthquake I felt.

Again the man sped up the car: Exactly.

Even: Where are we going? And who are you?

The man smiled: We're going to pick up a few more passengers. And for now, you can call me Silver.

End of part 3.Now everyone needs to write part two of each of their sections and then they'll all meet up.

Comment by Vincent Prendick (Shadow Eater) on April 22, 2013 at 9:02am

To finish off the first part, those who wrote the first parts of their story, writers of Vicki and James, need to have them meet a mysterious person they have a bad feeling about. They have to realize it, and they all run from their current situation. Just check out my second part of Even to see what I mean.

Comment by Hannah Hancock (Twili) on April 18, 2013 at 10:26pm

Maybe they should meet another person like them, but nobody really knows about that character. Like, u really just know their name, and that they have been in a similar situation. No background information. That way people could build off of that character, and it might make the story more interesting. How do u guys like that idea?

Comment by Vincent Prendick (Shadow Eater) on April 18, 2013 at 8:54pm

Not exactly. Like the second part I wrote, we need the presence that people are after them before they meet. That way, once they do they feel safer knowing that they're not alone. I think that there should be a fourth that has had the same happen to him/her a while ago that informs the three exactly what they are up against and what they have. So those who wrote the intros, write a second part where they meet a mysterious man or something and they realize that something is wrong. The. They run off. Read my part two to see what I mean.

Comment by EPIC Pop-Tart (Winged Turcoon) on April 18, 2013 at 8:34pm

At this point should Vicki, James, and Even meet?

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