I made a little story of an adventure if Rhett and Link read this i would be the most happy person ever. could anyone help me out.

On the eleventh of November, 1111ap (11/11/1111 after Pluto), a competition was held to see how many different types of stone an astronaut could collect while navigating the Dwarf-planet Pluto. An astronaut named Link Neal collected 2295 newtons of rock, and for his prize, he and 1 other friend were awarded the chance to explore a planet in DEEP-DEEP-SPACE. Link chose a friend of his named Rhett McLaughlin to accompany him on his voyage.

The new, unexplored, uncharted planet that Rhett And Link are going to explore is almost identical in environment of Earth’s moon. The two friends are allowed to take ten items of their choice that they think they would need to survive. The ten items the two agreed on are: MREs, Water in squirt bags and squeeze tubes, the landing craft with bunks, clothing- a variety of light and heavy, bicycle, flashlight, hiking boots, backpack, rope, and a camera to record their voyage. Rhett and link were transported to the planet with

The Neptune 6 rocket.

After successfully entering orbit of the planet 6 months after the launch, the landing gear set its rout to land next to a crater that had a small-unknown ship inside of it. When Rhett and Link landed the first thing they did was check the atoms that made the atmosphere of the planet, the temperature, the air pressure, and radiation levels. While doing this they saw that the air was breathable the air pressure was the same as earth, and the temperature was a steady 82  F. It seemed midday outside.

Rhett decided to be the one who takes his first breath outside of the craft. As he does he feels weightless but he still is on the ground. Rhett told Link to get out of the landing craft and breath fresh air. Link brought out 2 MREs, and water.

After lunch Link took out the bicycle to examine the small ship. Instead of a ship Link saw Sputnik 1 half buried in the ground with a small un-human mark on it. When he pulled it out, the hole lead to a very large cave. The two friends decided to explore this cave using their rope, flashlight, MREs, water Hiking boots, and a backpack. During their cave exploration they found a weird layer of metal every 10 feet.

After going straight for 6 days Rhett and Link ended up at where they started, in a crater with sputnik  next to the hole they came out of. The landing craft was where it was before, but when Rhett turned around and looked in the hole he could see the light from the other side.

The two decided to send a small rover through the cave.  Four days later the rover came back from the same hole. Link and Rhett thought it would be a good idea to stay in the landing craft for the night. As they entered they saw the craft was smaller than before, and had the same mark on the wall as the one on sputnik. When they woke Rhett  saw a ball of light heading in their direction, then Link screamed “That is a Comet!!! Get in the Hole!!” When they were in the hole they heard a loud Boom!! And Link awoke in his bed on Pluto The day of the competition.