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Let me know what you think of the beginning of my story. Have any suggestions?  

  I stare at the ground beneath me. The cobblestones I stand on are uneven and uncomfortable against my bear feet. I look up from beneath me and notice that I am in the middle of an alley way with no one else around me. As I walk forward, I notice a tapping sound a distance away. What…